How to dismantle me:
Please insert coin.
...
Thank you.
Please enjoy this game.
Hope to live,
Live to die.
Love to keep,
And keep to sigh.
Sigh your last,
But never pretend,
To hope that hope,
To live again.
<3 Vynn, The Paragon of Humanity.
P.S. Just to explain, I just feel this is how life is. Like, you let someone take you over like your a game and next thing you know, BAM! you're dead.
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i like it a lot, though it is a bit disturbing.
That's a great poem. I always have trouble writing serious poetry.
I just started a deviantart account! Woot!
hmmm, an interesting idea. What about the people that use everyone else around them? And those that are able to look through deceptions and not be used?
But it was a very nice poem all the same.
Ees anano retal
Cuppy
It flows so nicely...except the beginning I had trouble connecting the first 4 lines with the rest of the poem, but maybe that's just me. Anyways I like it. L8r.
Yeah. Thats how I would describe life.
Here's my account
http://afleetingdream93.deviantart.com/
I'll add you too! :)
Hope to live love to die? I dont get it.
-Fang6
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