Okay, so since some of you liked that small piece from FWT (some of you might be giving me weird looks) I revealed a LOOONNG time ago, I thought I'd let you all read the story I'm posting online. It was inspired by the anime
Naruto and
Naruto Shippuuden. I'm quite happy with how it's turning out so far, but it's still kind of in the boring still-explaining-but-getting-to-the-good-part-of-the-story spot, but the next chapter will (or should) have some action. Also, sorry for uploading so much at one time, but if anyone wants to read, I'd like feedback on how you liked it! Oh! And, before I forget,
here's a link to the characters (well, most the main ones, so far) and their info (i.e. age, theme song, bio, etc.) if you're having trouble picturing them.
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Prologue________________-
In the big city of Kalleghi, our house, the Theay household, was in big fuss. My father and important man in the military, Luke, and older brother, Lev, were leaving for war; they were all dressed and ready. My mother, Kami, was trying to keep me and my younger brother under control.
Well... mostly me....
"But
mother! I want to go with them!" I screamed. "I'm four now! I want to go help!"
"Dada!" Kedai, who had just turned three, reached out to father from mother's arms. Father took him and gave him a hug.
"Dada has to go now, but he'll be back!" He said to Kedai. Lev knelt down in front of me and wrapped me in his arms.
"You have to be strong and wait until you're trained." He said soothingly. "So go to school and train hard so you can graduate! Then you can fight like a warrior to!" He gave me a warm smile and stood up. Dad and mom kissed.
"I love you all! We'll both be back just fine!" Dad said. Lev looked down and saw the disbelieving look on my face.
"I promise." He said with another warm smile. Then I smiled and hugged him one last time.
Lev never broke a promise.
TWO MONTHS LATER"Mother!" I yelled excitedly. "Mother! The warriors are here! They're walking through town! Daddy and Lev will be there! Come on!" I ran out the door and toward the main road in town.
"Lucy?" I heard my mother call. "Lucy! Stop! Stay with me!" I kept running, and I knew my mother was running after me with Kedai in her arms. I ran through the crowd to the edge of the road. The smile I had faded when I saw the warriors faces. The long line passed by. I looked at every face closely, but none of them were Daddy or Lev.
And then, I saw a truly horrifying sight. Four men were carrying a stretcher and on that stretcher was Daddy. His face was pale and his body was still. I watched him pass and heard Mother gasp behind me. Then, Lev passed us. He passed us with a dead look on his face. His clothes were more torn than anyone else, and his whole body seemed to be in bandages. His long black hair was dirty and messy. The parade ended at that, and everyone parted to see their loved ones in safety. Mother ran to Daddy, but I stayed glued to the spot. I suddenly realized how gray the day was. How sad the atmosphere was. It started to drizzle. Was this a dream?
It had to be, because Lev had broken his promise....
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Chapter 1________________-
I calmly walked out of the bathroom, ready for everything that was going to happen that day. I yawned and then opened my eyes wide. Wide enough to see my brother's room door was shut. I growled and pounded on his door.
"Kedai! You had better be ready or I'm going to come in there and
kick your ass!!"
"You're going to
kiss my ass?" He asked. "It's about time!"
"Damn you, little brother..." I muttered, bowing my head. Nonetheless, my hands curled into fists and I opened the door, slamming it against the wall with fire in my eyes. The smug smirk on his goofy twelve-year-old face disappeared as I stomped toward him. He was ready to go out to my graduation, but after that comment, I wasn't exactly ready to show mercy. I picked him up by his shirt, swooping him off his bed and holding him in front of my face. I pulled my arm back, getting ready for a nice, hard punch.
"N-no no, Lucy!" He said, putting his hands up and waving them back and forth like I had it all wrong. "I-it was j-just a joke! You can take a joke, r-right?"
"It's my day, today, Kedai, I think you can lay off the 'jokes' today." He started nodding wildly. I lifted him up further and dropped him. He fell on his rear and watched me closely as I walked out of his room and slammed the door. I cracked my knuckles and looked at the clock. It was almost time to leave. I sighed and walked down the hall. I lightly knocked on the door.
"Mom? Are we leaving soon?"
"Just a moment, dear!" I heard from inside. "Are your brothers ready?"
"I think it's safe to say they are. I haven't checked on Lev, but he's usually ready on time. Kedai's ready, I think." Mother opened her bedroom door. She was in a long, semi-formal white dress. Her long, light blond hair was in a complicated braid and her beautiful face had little make-up on it. She wore white sandals that strapped around her ankles. She was pretty and practical, classic Mother.
"You look so pretty!" She said with a motherly smile across her face. I looked away.
"Jeez, mom, it's just semi-formal..." I was wearing a tight, uncomfortable braid and a dress shirt with black pants. It was so formal, I wanted to jump in some mud.
"But you're never this gussied up! You're so adorable!"
"Okay, let's just leave now, please?" I said rolling my eyes. I walked down the hall with Mom behind me. I knocked on Lev's door while Mom looked over Kedai.
"Lev? You ready?" Lev had taken the weekend off for my graduation. He didn't have his own place yet, so he stayed with us in his old bedroom. After the war. He was appointed lieutenant of the Local Protection. He helped guard the city from attacks and sometimes patrolled the city to watch for local crimes. All men and women in lower ranks in the military must stay in the military dorms. They are allowed to visit their family, but have to wait for a higher rank to have their own house. If you're a higher rank, but you want to stay at the dorms, you can be moved to a special, more luxurious part of the dorms. That's where Lev lived.
Lev opened the door and smiled warmly.
"I'm ready!" He said. He was wearing a suit as well, and his long, sleek hair was tied back into a ponytail. He put his hand on my shoulder. "I am proud to be your brother, Lucy. You're becoming a full-fledged ninja today! And you had straight A's all through school, in body and mind. You'll make history." Another smile, and then we walked out the door and started down the road to the school.
He said I'd make history, but was that good, or bad?
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Chapter 2_______________-
We walked up to the front doors of the Kalleghi Academy for Young Warriors. There, two men from the military were standing guard on either side of the entrance. They looked us over, and when they saw Lev, they saluted, looking straight ahead. Apparently, they were avoiding eye-contact.
"S-sir!" They said in unison.
"Lieutenant!" One of them said. "May I ask what you are doing here?"
"Well," Lev answered with an easygoing smile. "I am, of course, here to witness my sister become a Level 1 Ninja!" He put his hand on my shoulder.
"O-oh!" The other said without breaking his salute. "Congratulations, sir!" Lev nodded and we continued through the doors. I inconspicuously watched them as we walked forward. They looked at each other and sighed out of relief. I raised my eyebrows and walked around a corner. Why would they fear Lev? I thought. We rounded another corner and came to the auditorium doors which were wide open. The room was full of people and "Congratulations!" signs. All of the teenagers that had gone to the K.A.Y.W. too were dressed up in nice clothes, just like me. Most of them seemed to hate it. Just like me.But there was one thing that these teens and I had difference in.
They all had friends, and I had none. Of course, I knew people. I had been in the same class as a portion of these kids since I started school at five-years-old. I had known some people of these people for about eight years, because we were always with the same people, the same teacher and students each year. But I'd always had trouble making friends. I just was never someone of interest, so people never hung around me for too long.
Perhaps there will be people from the other classes that will like me? Maybe. But now, I'll focus on where my family is going. I followed them to the middle of the audience seats and was about to enter when Mother turned around to face me.
"Lucy, you should go talk to some of your friends! We still have quite a wait!" Of course, I never told anyone I had none.
"Oh!" I said. "Uh... I d-don't see any of them! I think I'll be fine waiting with you guys!"
"Oh, that's fine," Lev said. "You should go look for them, Lu." He gave me a warm smile and sat in his seat.
"Yes! We'll sit right here, and you can have the end seat so you don't have to walk past everyone!"
"Oh -- uh... okay. Thanks." I said, giving a convincing smile.
Damn!I walked to the crowd and looked around for imaginary people. Once I was sure my family couldn't see me, I tried to pass through the crowd invisibly. A few people elbowed me, and I said "Sorry" or "Excuse me." I finally exited the thick part of the crowd, but something tripped me. I fell forward and quickly executed a tuck-and-roll. An old trick, I admit, but incredibly useful. Still crouching, I looked behind me to see what I had tripped over, but nothing was there. I frowned and stood up. Before I could completely straighten up, however, the surprises kept coming.
Suddenly my head felt like it was split open. I cried out in pain and squeezed my head, as if to shut a gaping hole. I looked up and saw a boy, my age, of course, who was dressed in a suit, like all of the other boys. He had dark, spiked brown hair. His neck and half of his face was covered with a cream-colored scarf. I shook my head. He rubbed his chin under the cloth. His eyebrows came together in a frown.
"Watch it!" He said angrily. "I think you broke my jaw!"
"Oh," I replied, brushing myself off. "don't be a baby. If I had broken your jaw, you wouldn't even be able to speak. Besides, if you don't want to get hit, then watch where you put your
face!" He got right in my own face.
"Why were you on the ground in the first place,
eh? You wouldn't have hit me if you weren't crawling around on the floor!"
"Well, if you weren't
stalking me, you wouldn't have leaned over and gotten hit!"
"Stalking? You're kidding right? Who in their right minds would want to stalk
you?""Look bub, if you don't want to have your throat torn out before you even become a ninja,
shut the hell up!""I think
you should be the one to
shut up!"
"Well, well..." A new voice interrupted the argument over our little train wreck. I looked behind me. A girl stood with a hand on her hip and a smirk on her face. Her red violet hair was cut short and fashioned with too much hairspray to make it look decent. She wore a blue dress and blue slip-on dress shoes. She had a beauty mark under her right eye and her skin was very tan. "Luce, you haven't been here five minutes and you're already in a fight." Luce's eyebrows evened out.
"Cammy," He said, not surprised. "How did you know I've only been here five minutes?" Cammy calmly walked over to Luce's side and stood for a moment. Then she punched the back of his head. He stumbled forward and I moved out of his way.
"I saw you enter,
dummy!" She said.
"Gah!" He yelled. "You don't have to
hit me!"
"Well, I was following you and calling your name! You
can't tell me you didn't hear..."
"Maybe I didn't want to be seen around you..." Cammy delivered another punch to the back of his head. He yelped and stumbled again. Then, Cammy seemed to notice me.
"Hi, there!" She said happily, picking up Luce and holding him up under an arm. "I'm Cammy and this temper-mental jerk is Luce."
"I think I have brain damage now..." Luce murmured under Cammy's arm.
"Oh, shut up, you had brain damage before this." Cammy said.
"I'm Lucy." I laughed.
"Ah, hear that, Luce? There's a person that almost shares your name, but will never share your idiocy." She chuckled. "Don't be fooled by his appearance, he's really a sweetheart." Luce wiggled out of Cammy's grasp and stood up straight, trying to regain his balance and his pride all at the same time.
"Shut up, woman." He said and walked away. We laughed again.
"He is, though." Cammy went on. "He was in my class, and he used to be
such a crybaby! But we're real close, so I can usually predict what will happen. He's really sympathetic if there's no-one but me around."
"Wow, hard to believe that." I said.
"Yeah, I know. But, he won't show his real self unless you're
really close."
"Oh." I said.
Well, I suppose that probably wont happen.
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Chapter 3_______________-
"So, what class were you in?" Cammy asked me as we leaned against a wall.
"Class 31." I replied. "You?"
"27" She said. "I've never seen you around town before, though."
"Oh! Yeah. I... I don't leave my property often. I've never really had anywhere to go with anybody but my little brother."
"Hmm... are you saying you don't have friends?"
I started. "Oh, I... I guess I am...."
"Oh, that's too bad. I don't have many friends, either. I suppose Luce is my only very good friend."
"Wow, that must be annoying."
"Yeah, it can be!" She laughed. She stared into the crowd. "People have just always thought I was weird. Nobody wanted to be around me. It was like they thought they would catch some kind of disease."
"Why? Do you know?"
She looked at the floor.
"Sort of." She said quietly. "I... I know what's different about me, but I don't know why they keep such a distance."
I studied her face, and then I noticed something.
"Oh! Your eyes..." I began.
"Are incredibly red?" She finished my sentence for me. "Yeah. That's the weird part of me. I can feel any kind of heat, even from a large distance away. I can see heat, too. I can't see your face right now, you just look like a bunch of different colors moving around in a human shape. The air is light red, too."
"So -- you technically can't see?" I asked in astonishment.
"Well, yes. I guess so. Even though colors are visible to me, I might as well be blind. But, glass and plastic can block it out just a bit, I usually like to wear sunglasses or goggles." She smiled. "But I pretty much go on what I can feel around me. It's almost like having 360 degree vision!"
"Wow! That's amazing! I wish I had that ability!" I said excitedly. How useful would it be to have 360 vision?
"Trust me," She said. "it's not all it's cracked up to be. I can only see so clearly with eye cover. It's like taking your vision and putting a layer of red paint over it."
"Oh, I see." She sounds like someone that wouldn't talk to me on normal circumstances. But she seems to have almost the same problem as me. Suddenly, she frowned.
"What the hell is he doing?" She asked, to herself, apparently.
"What?" I asked.
"Luce." She said. "His body temperature is changing rapidly. Back and forth between hot and cold.... What's going on?" She started to walk away. I followed her. I hadn't realized before, but now I saw that she looked straight ahead when she walked; like she couldn't see at all. As she walked across a the floor, she talked.
"This is odd.... There are two people with him and -- oh,
not again!" She started to jog.
"Again?" I asked as we grew closer to a crowd. "What happened? It's happened before?"
"Yeah," She said in an angry tone. "and I know exactly what they're doing and who's doing it!" She pushed through the crowd, showing no mercy to anyone in her way. I walked behind her in the path she made. I caught up with her just as we got to the middle of the crowd. A space was cleared out for three boys. the one in the middle was Luce, the other two were unknown to me. The two boys I hadn't met were tugging on Luce's scarf. Luce was trying desperately to keep it in place. His hands were occupied, so he couldn't seem to fight back. There must really be something he doesn't want people to see. I thought. One of the boys, his hair bright blue, grabbed Luce's arm.
Suddenly, Luce was covered in frost. Then, the other boy, his hair as red as Cammy's eyes, touched his arm and the frost melted.
"Hey!
Hey! HEY!" Cammy yelled. She yanked someone's water bottle out of their hands and threw it. For a mostly blind girl, she had some kick-ass aim. The hard, plastic bottle hit the redhead square in the forehead. He let go of Luce and fell backwards. Seeing an opening, Luce messily wrapped the scarf back around his face. He looked at the remaining boy with menace in his eyes. Grabbing the shocked boy's hand hard, he picked him up, flung him over his head, and onto the redhead. He glared at him and then turned back to the crowd and opened his arms wide.
"Anybody
else?" He called triumphantly. Cammy and I rolled our eyes. Now that his guard was up and he had a winning chance, he was as cocky as ever.
"Huh? Nobody?" He said.
"Come on! I can take yah!" Cammy cleared her throat. Luce glanced at her and waited a moment.
"Fine," He said quietly, eerily. "but I'm not letting my guard down again. That was a one-time thing!" He walked between us and through the crowd. Everyone cleared a path for him and Cammy, who followed him. I glanced at the two boys moaning on the ground once more and then quickly followed them.
"So... I take it you usually get into fights?" I asked Luce when I caught up with them.
"Now what would give you that idea?" Luce asked sarcastically.
"Tch..." I rolled my eyes. "Don't be sarcastic with me!"
"Why not?" He challenged as turned to face me.
"Well, why should be the question." I spat. "You don't have to be such a
jerk all the time!"
"Just one thing after another..." Cammy muttered, but we ignored her.
"You don't have to be so
nosy all the time!" His face was turning red in anger. "Why don't you go crawl back into that friendless hole you call your life!"
I was speechless. That hurt, badly. When he saw the look on my face, his eyes softened.
"I--I didn't mean that...." He said ruefully. I bowed my head. I'd heard that going around at the academy. I had better hearing than people thought. Kids had made jokes out of my loneliness and laughed like it was the funniest thing. I swallowed hard. I had hoped before I came here that it wouldn't always be like that. But I guessed I just didn't have any luck whatsoever....
"I -- but -- I --!" Luce stuttered. Cammy's fist flew out of the blue and hit his cheek, hard. He flew to the side and Cammy put her arm around my shoulder.
"Don't listen to Luce!" She said. "You know he just let anger talk! He didn't mean it!" I shook my head to clear it and looked up.
"I--I know!" I smiled, hopefully it was convincing. "It just caught me off-guard! I'm okay, really!" I walked to Luce and held out my hand. He looked at it incredulously.
"You--you're not mad?"He asked.
"Ah, no! I forgive quickly, don't worry. I know you didn't mean it, of course."
"Oh! I--uh..." He took my hand and stood up. "You--" He didn't get to finish, because then the audience was called to their seats.
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Chapter 4________________-
Everyone took their seats as the graduation started. The lord mayor, Russ Minirai, walked out onto the stage and stopped in front of the podium that stood in the middle. He wore the suit he always wore at work with all his badges pinned to his chest. He was not old, but not young; his brown hair was speckled with gray and his face was slightly lined. Wrinkles at the corner of his eyes and mouth showed he smiled often. Everyone's eyes were on him as he spoke his first sentence.
"My, my, we sure are formal today. I feel like the only casual one here!" He smiled at us. A small chuckle came up from some of the people in the crowd. Most people smiled, probably glad not to have a serious lord mayor.
"Well then," He continued. "Welcome soon-to-be-ninja graduates! You must all be very excited to become adults! I am happy to host yet another graduation this year. I know all of you will succeed tremendously! But first, let me explain
how you'll graduate." I saw a lot of kids look at each other.
"What?" Someone whispered behind me. "I thought this was all!"
"Oh ho!" Minirai laughed. "You didn't think a simple ceremony would make you ninjas, did you? Oh, no no no! This is just where we explain what will happen!" Most of the kids made surprised noises.
"There are three tests you must pass before becoming a real ninja. The first tests your abilities. The second tests your knowledge. And the third tests your skill. If you cannot pass all of the tests..." He paused. "you must go back to the academy." A large gasp emitted from the crowd. I gaped at him.
"Well, we have some surprised faces in the audience!" His eyes swept over the audience. "Only the best will pass. But! You
do have time to prepare. I suggest you gather your nerves and get a good night's sleep tonight!" He laughed alone.
"So, then. If you pass, you will be given a Cloth." He held up a thin, long piece of black fabric. "This will officially announce you as a ninja. And the more you get, the higher your rank." Okay,
now I get it.
That's why Lev had always had those things tied to his bag!
But why the secrets? I wondered in my mind.
"I bet you're all wondering why we kept this secret!" Minirai suddenly said. I started. "Well, we wanted to see how you prepared yourself for the unknown. We wanted to see whether you worked hard to take on anything that suddenly came up unexpectedly, or if you just did what you were told so you could pass..." I saw some kids look at their feet, away from the lord mayor.
Hmm... I thought.
So how long are the--
"The tests -- or exams, as we call them -- will only last a day." He said.
Jeez! I thought.
That's incredibly creepy! How does he keep reading my mind? "That day," He continued. "is tomorrow." The crowd gasped again.
"You can't expect us to be ready by tomorrow!" Someone shouted.
"Yeah!" Another voice came up. "How are we supposed to prepare ourselves?" Sounds of agreements came from all around.
"Didn't I explain the surprise just now?" Minirai asked. The sounds of anger and nervousness ceased, replaced by an uncomfortable silence. Minirai looked across the audience. I felt like his eyes lingered on me for a moment.
"So, ability, knowledge, skill. Easy, right?" He said.
"Tch..." I quietly said to no-one.
Probably not. I thought.
"You will, as you may know, be assigned to a dorm until you're at least 3rd Level. That could take any amount of time, depending on how talented you are. You will have a room mate, too, of course." A few people raised their eyebrows, but there were no loud sounds. "After the exams, your roommate and team members will be determined by your skills so you are divided evenly. I hope you all get along!" I sighed pessimistically. Ooh, lets
all get along!
"Your roommate will be on your team. The teams will be made up of four beginners and a 5th Level as the leader/teacher. Make sure you can get along with your teammates, you'll be with them until you die, or are no longer a ninja, which will be a very long time from now, unless you are a
traitor." He emphasized the last word with an unfamiliar emotion.
There was a quiet murmur traveling over the crowd. Once everything was silent again, the lord mayor spoke.
"Well, I do hope I mentioned everything! Further details will be explained tomorrow! Until then..." He raised his hand in farewell. "12:00 at the training grounds, don't be late!" He walked slowly to back stage. Voices of worried students and amused parents rose almost instantly. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Lev, Mother, and Kedai look at me. I kept the thoughtful expression on my face.
"Well," Lev said. "are you ready?"
"No-one's ever fully ready, no matter what they think...." I replied, getting out of my seat and walking toward the door.
"That's our Lucy!" Lev said, patting my head. I looked at the ceiling and sighed.
It seems life has more surprises than necessary.
Okay!! Don't forget to comment on how it was, if you read it all! I tried to be funny at a few parts, but I think I probably failed... Anyway, thanks so much for reading!! <3<3